There’s a detour onto the city bus and then a quick trip to India before coming back to the “towering turrets” of New Jersey again.
Nevertheless, Princeton rejected her, and when I approached the university to find out if it had anything to do with her essay, it cited its policy of not commenting on any applicants or admissions decisions.
“It’s a bold move to critique the very institution he was applying to,” said Mr.
Bauld, who also teaches English at Horace Mann School in New York City.
“When I visit my friends, I see the names of elite institutions adorning the living room walls,” wrote Mr. “I am conscious that these framed diplomas are testaments to the hard work and accomplishments of my friends’ parents and siblings. received plenty of essays about the immigrant experience. Li risked writing one of many stories about long odds and hard work in an unfamiliar, unforgiving place. I think he’s proud of his accomplishments and work ethic, but there’s also a humility each day when he takes off his preppy blue blazer in front of his mom.”The essay by Ana Castro, an 18-year-old senior at the Doane Stuart School in Rensselaer, N.
Nevertheless, the sight of them was an irritating reminder of the disparity between our households. But he did not fall into that trap and will be attending N. Y., is about not quite arriving, in spite of having been born in the United States.
What these four writers have in common is an appetite for risk.
Not only did they talk openly about issues that are emotionally complex and often outright taboo, but they took brave and counterintuitive positions on class, national identity and the application process itself.
“I don’t believe that any one writing sample should trump what they did over four years.” Still, he acknowledged that his staff had been taken with the story told by Lyle Li, a 19-year-old Brooklyn resident who applied this year.
He wrote about his family’s restaurant and his mother, an immigrant from China who once wanted to be a doctor and now works behind a cash register. “His essay brought his family’s circumstance and background into Technicolor,” Mr. “He paints a very vivid picture of what life is really like in his home.