If you accept me to your school, I will study whatever you want.
I like to write, but if you need more Biology majors I will put on that lab coat and make you proud.
Just understand I have decided to use this platform to tell Dartmouth how all-in I am on them.
Guys, I’m willing to burn every bridge I have built in the college admissions process so far.
The folks at who read this application may think that makes me a sick man, but I do not care. Admit me and you get an average student who is absolutely devoted to your institution no matter what happens.
Or you can take some straight-A genius who does things by the book.
My parents have told me that wherever I go to college I will learn so much over the next four years, both inside and outside of the classroom.
They met at , so I guess over their four years they learned to settle for less in relationships too. But if that’s what you need from me, all you have to do is ask and I will burn that bridge too.
Most of the essays sound like they are writing by English professors that have been doing it for a long time.
And don't get me started on the advanced vocabulary. No boasting, the most complex word in it is "quaint," and it's about her love for writing.