He or she doesn’t have to spend time thinking of interesting or specific verbs, or writing in clear and concise language.
It may be a time saver, but it will lead to a more muddled paper. Odysseus was a poor leader, which is shown by his refusal to listen to his men. As a poor leader, Odysseus refused to listen to his men. Women were unable to vote for decades after men were able to do so. While men elected official after official, women dreamed of going to the polls themselves. In the first case, it is more concise, and in the second, it forced me to write a more interesting phrase.
Examples: Jane Eyre was written by Charlotte Bronte./ Charlotte Bronte wrote Jane Eyre. If you want to write with greater clarity and specificity, pay special attention to weeding out the dead verbs the next time you revise a paper.
Use these four methods to eliminate almost all of them.
“It was determined by the committee that the report was inconclusive.” Again, the subject is weak and indeterminate.
Two actors, the committee and the report, are vying for the lead role here, but the head of the sentence would be to replace one passive sentence with another.
When I taught elementary school, our coaches instructed us to have funerals for “dead verbs” with our classes.
Our students created coffins for “is” and “was” and buried them on school grounds – that’s how strongly they felt about weeding them out of the students’ writing.
Why not write it like this instead: The beautiful, cold, and oblivious woman ignored the young man’s affections. was a great leader and a peaceful man who died in 1968.
/A great leader and proponent of peace, Martin Luther King Jr. William Shakespeare is one of the greatest writers of all time and was responsible for changing literature forever.